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By : LadyofJustice
  • From ANON - Kawka on September 14, 2015
    Oh there's the hanky panky. This chapter covers the sexual result of their reunion, which I find very plausible for both of them.

    I wish it had dealt with more foreplay, for the both of them, though the pacing wasn't really thrown off by this. This chapter felt more like it was intended to focus on their mutual feelings rather than the act itself. I would have personally liked if it had been a bit longer and she didn't just immediantly conk out, so they could do some cuddles and pillow talk, but I'm guessing that will be used next chapter as a form of exposition?

    All in all, I'm not disappointed in the second chapter. Honestly though it could've been simply added to the end of the first chapter. Even so, it still stands well enough on its own that I can't really complain and can only find small things to nitpick about. I hope to see more. :)
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  • From ANON - Kawka on September 14, 2015
    No hanky panky, but that's definitely not a drawback here.

    The pacing was fluid and it didn't drag and trip up in descriptions or dialogue. It was an easy read while still establishing settings, placements, attitudes, and personalities. Short, simple, sweet, and overall perfect. I don't have anything negative at all to say or even any changes to suggest.

    Much approval. Very story. Such project. Wow.
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