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Reviews for A new kind of magic

By : JagerBark
  • From ANON - Why are you reading the anon's name when you should be reading the review? on December 07, 2015
    Huh.
    I am extremely intrigued on where you are taking this.
    I like how there is a plot and a bunch of subplots at the same time, that is well done.
    As for pairings...
    I would love to see one with Kellam, but I can't seem to find him around here anywhere.
    Good luck!
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  • From ThePairingGuy on November 27, 2015
    Pretty good. The setup for the sex is the usual contrived aphrodisiac infection, but you have enough character development that the sex seems to matter, and the scenes are highly inventive. Take more care with the proofreading, though. My favorite bit was Henry's innocently showing off his erection; that really made me laugh.
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  • From AFFModerator on November 08, 2015

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