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Reviews for The Raider gets Raided

By : Fox_JJ
  • From MorbidFantasy on February 20, 2016
    Gonna be honest here. I clicked on your story with certain expectations after reading the tags you included. Thus far I've only seen you include at most 3 of the gazillion genres you claim to have in the story.

    I'm not saying your writing isn't good. It's fine writing, and the shipping of Lara and Sam is legit. However, I can't help but feel as if I've been subjected to false advertising when three chapters in I've yet to see anything remotely resembling [3Plus, Abuse, Anal, BDSM, Beast, Bi, B-Mod, D/s, DP, Exhib, Fet, Fingering, F/D, HJ, Humil, MC, M/s, Oral, Preg, Rape, SH, SI, Solo, Spank, Tent, Toys, Violence, WD]

    My suggestion is for you to narrow your tags to things you actually have in your fic. You can always add more in the future but right now you seem to have a good thing going with this F/F and self pleasure focused plot, so why dilute the good stuff with a bunch of random tags?
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