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Reviews for Reins of the Tomb Raider

By : HunterOpera
  • From MorbidFantasy on April 25, 2016
    Lol do I see cameos from Marvel and Capcom in there? Do I see two cameos from your other "Masque'd" fic? That's quite a line up for the race you have there, which begs the question: when are the other race "entries" going to get their origin stories here in Hunterverse, eh?
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  • From FuckUSay on April 25, 2016
    Stephs in trouble.
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  • From ANON - Leo on April 25, 2016
    I recognise that reference... Steph was referenced in the first trailer when we see a strung up body Lara recognises in a cave at the start of the game, but they cut it out for the release.

    Ironically, for this story Lara actually saved Steph's life by refusing to let her come along.

    I wonder when Sam/Himiko will reappear... and if it'll somehow change Duchess' situation.
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  • From MorbidFantasy on April 16, 2016
    Chapter 13 was fantastic. Obviously Lara's not going to be serving out the full 10 years but so far she's spent upwards of 2 years in Parmistan. A good span of time for near permanent mental trauma. I really dug the day to day details, as usual, and how little she reacted to James, showing just how broken she was. Of particular interest is how the youngsters of Parmistan treat the "animals", how openly hedonistic they are.

    A suggested edit would be regarding the details of the new plug in her front. I'm reading the plugs themselves are shaped like Bacchus and Poena, but wasn't entirely clear if the vaginal Bacchus plug also had hair on it, if it was separate from the pony tail plug, or how it's being held in (mechanical or by muscles alone).

    It would be particularly interesting if Lara came into contact with other "service animals". I recall James seeing one during his initial visits to Parmistan, bu thusfar Lara hasn't had any interactions with ones such as herself, although I assumed that was because she was still in training.

    She should race another such as herself, and if she loses (whether fairly or due to deliberate handicap), it might make for good detail.
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  • From ANON - Burnsidhe on April 07, 2016
    I dislike "bad end" and "revenge rape" stories. This is turning into one of the worse examples of both. The villain of the story is apparently flawless, his plans work perfectly, and he suffers no setbacks. He needs a setback. Estates have existing trustees. English law does not recognize legal documents signed under duress. All existing trustee has to do to overturn power of attorney is prove Lara is being held in degrading conditions. Videos leak. Pictures get taken.
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  • From nothinghere on April 02, 2016
    Oh god yes, keep this coming. Her breaking is perfect!
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  • From MorbidFantasy on March 30, 2016
    Really digging this. Looks like you got the domination/indoctrination out of the way in a jiffy. Looking forward to main plot and how you resolve all this. Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 28, 2016
    might work out? you already told us. it will.
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  • From ANON - Giuseki on March 16, 2016
    HunterOpera's trademark menace buds in the Tomb Raider setting. The thrill of malice in molding humans from heroines is offered to the reader. Ruination and reconstitution are the delicacies presented, accepted by this reader with delight. Glad to see him return.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 15, 2016
    Ahh yes, a tale to reasure all fuckless wonders they are not alone in their hatred of all those mean women who find them tactless and creepy. ASSHOLES CAN WIN!!! YEAH MOM'S BASEMENT DWELING ME!
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  • From ANON - Fan on March 15, 2016
    The suspense is killing me. I need to see what happens next. I love stories about strong women who get broken down.
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