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Reviews for Lara's enslavement

By : HPharem
  • From ninesenshi on February 18, 2018

    Write more.  Lara needs to be kept and knocked up.


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  • From ninesenshi on May 11, 2017

    You need to proof-read, not just spell-check.  Simplistic, you need to spend more time on descriptions and take more time with each sex-act as they are the point of your story.  Try and make the dialog a little less `bad porn movie'.  Some potential but it needs a lot of work.


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  • From SmuttyMcSmutface on May 11, 2017

    Love this. Beast soon please? 


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