rate_review Reviews

Very well written. I diffenatly look forward to seeing more of your works with my favorite succubus *Smiles*

its rare to find akstakstalkers fanfic..even one that explains gam game! Keep it up its interesting..even with the other shows in it too!

Not bad. The formatting is a little bit problematic (although that may be a browser issue) and the sex scene is not exactly searing. However, attention is paid to consistency of characterization, story structure, framing, and so on. I wouldn't rank it highly as porn, but as fanfiction in general goes this is of above-average quality.

Excellent story, great structure and a great plot. Keep writing!

This is a pretty interesting story which basically means i like it and i like how you have the LBG components in your story. I can't wait for the next chapter and i hope that it comes soon. Also, i love the lchapchapters personally i like to read em when they are long.

That was damn good! There should be motoritories like this! Keep up the good w W.X