rate_review Reviews

Yee!! i loved it! And strangely enough it actually had a decent story line too, unlike other stories out there who just concentrate on the sex. Seriously they bug me, it's like "whats the point in that, great so two (or more) people do it, it's not like that doesnt happen everyday!" Lol, i hope you do write a sequal, it's great!

OOOOOOOOhhhhhhhh i absolutely love this story and has been earmarked now as my favourite erotic story :D i would so love to see a sequal to this!! I love the way Kain appears tender and loving towards Raziel which in my opinion is exactly how they were. But then that's just me ;)

This is probably my tenth time reading this story. I come back every so often to read it n, in, it's that good! Your descriptions were very good and short, which is how I like descriptions to be. There wasn't a single error in the story! You can't imagine how refreshing that is. I'll be reading along and suddenly I'm lost because the person left out some crucial words or, this is the worst, decided to randomly switch from first person to third person. I'm a big fan of AU (you should read MY version of Pokemon! No...no, you shouldn't. Yes, I'm a Pokemon whore) and I'm also a big fan of LoK (though I pretty much just discovered it...). I reallyreallyreally like how you portrayed Kain! He was just...I dunno...so...yay. <---Lame. Anyway, great job, keep those AUs alive and don't forget to eat you vegetables. *Re-run*

Damn review thingie cut off the last bit. Keep AUs alive, write on, and eat your vegetables. *Re-run*

I think you did a nice job. I want to see if there's a sequel now... ja ne!

i LOVED this story. I just knew that kain and Raziel had something going on. This puts a really beautiful twist on it, and gives even more justifications to certain.. ah.. events.

Wow. Just. . .wow. ^.^ That has to be one of the best Legacy of Kain fics I've read. I think you did a super spiffy job of it, especially for only having played Soul Reaver. I've played all the games, and personally I don't find anything wrong with it. Obviously it's not how Raziel became a vampire, but it's a beautiful alternative. ^.^
Also, I must say, your writing skills are quite good indeed, everything was written well and the characters were believable. All in all this is an extremely enjoyable fan fiction.

That was cool! I think you did really well for not knowing jack squat about the other games besides soul reaver. I sure hope you do a sequel I want a sequel!

Great story. Raziel might be OOC here but Kain is quite himself. As you said it's completely AU and the lemon could've been better integrated with the story (now it seems a bit rushed) but noneths I s I really enjoyed reading it. The final scene in LoK:Defiance has made me recall your story as the chemistry between both characters seemed very strong and somehow it made the scene so much better :D Thanks!