AFF Fiction Portal
GroupsMembersexpand_more
person_addRegisterexpand_more

rate_review Reviews

for The Spoils of War

by onichan01

person Sarah
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! I was so dying for some good Dynasty Warriors slash fiction! I'd never considered Zheng He and Zhou Yun as a pairing (mostly because I couldn't think of a situation where they'd have the opportunity to hump) but I do like the whole secret lover aspect you used to get them together.
person aLexis
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG THAT WAS YOUR FIRST!!!!!!!!!! That was sooo good, I loved it pleasepleasepleaeepalspelsplepaleplapselpaslepapeplelpepleaseeeeeeeee write another one!
person Yumiko-Takanashi
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! This one is H.O.T! HOT HOT HOT!!!! BLAZING! Hahahahha u get the picture I love it!!!! *drools* Zhao Yun sooooooooooo sexyyyy!!! Check out my first fic please called "brotherly love." ur my insperation! with the lubracint!!!
person Bunny Doll
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol... I agree with the last reviewy person... I only notced it was Zhou YUN when you said spear warrior or w/e... I LOVED that story -lemon- yaoi- thingy... IT ROX MY SOX!! lolz... Your writing Kicks Ass... write more... storys that is... Peace.
person Anon
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Frankly, I have no idea whether you were talking about Zhou Yu or Zhao Yun.
person Hotaru1421
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story.It's actually one of the better yaoi stories i've ever read.Wish you would write more...pwease....I give you huggies if you do?:3
person Leela
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't review often, but I wd tod to congratulate you on this fic. For afirst lemon, it's very good. I love the character interpretation, although I sug ref refining the dialogue for DW fanfics. Good job.
person Anon
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you say this is your first real lemon?? well, it great!!! i would have never guessed. This was written very well
person Melanie
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gorgeous, gorgeous stuff... I loved this one when it was on Smoochies, and I love it even more now - having thought it had disappeared forever. I'm so happy to see it again! ^_^ Very sexy indeed, and being your first lemon, you ought to be VERY proud. *happy sigh*
person Drahk
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmm... that was good. more, please? *begs* perhaps next time, Yun should win, just to prove that He isn't that invincible peacock he makes himself out to be

Age Verification Required

This website contains adult content. You must be 18 years or older to access this site.

Are you 18 years of age or older?