rate_review Reviews

A very interesting story, sir/madam. I must be a horrible person, but I really enjoyed that. It takes guts to write something with those wonderful reptiles we call koopas in a pairing other than Bowser/Peach. You certainly got in the curiosity of a pubescent teen, haven't you? (I remember it vividly.) I'm very happy with the characterization before the enjoyable lemon. It was a nice bit of drama when Bowser burst in. I wouldn't try a stunt like that every chapter, but it was an interesting little twist of events.
I sencerely hope to see a second, third, so on and so forth, chapter in this series.

Xima

I don't want to sound like a screaming fan, but YOU ARE MY GOD, SUSIEBEECA. Your art and your storywriting is excellent, and you've got such an amazingly twisted psyche! I first saw your art on your Livejournal (sliver_n_glod) and even then I was enthralled. If you've got MSN please add hoshi_no_gao@hotmail.com!

Was there something else? ... oh yeah!, will you marry me?

LOL

That was both funny AND hot.

Man...

That kicks ass.

Mario's gonna be pissed when he finds out what happened with Peach and Wendy oooooo! but it was a great story not to complicated to understand yet deeply innovative

That was just great.. first wendy x peach fic i've ever read(and maybe the only one there is at all..) ^_~

...I should not have enjoyed that as much as I did. Not shabby, and quite funny in places. X3

...Well, that was interesting. XD;;

WeI loI loved it personally I loved the story leading up to the F/F scene..but it was too short.. There definately needs to be a second chapter...that one rocked