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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The story is great. It doesn't really bug me that you hate a charector and write geared at that. Doesn't matter that much. Looking forward to an update.
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GODDAMMIT.
I want to punch that girl in the FACE.
I want to punch that girl in the FACE.
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you get an A for Awsome!
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah! Great! I'm glad Riku and Sora saved her. I really don't like Kairi. I have the game and I haven't liked her since I played it.
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January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ouch... you really made kairi a bitch in here.... nice work tho! ~_~
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June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you sick bastard...............
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Its okay
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April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You were just a little too restless when you wrote it and so you madents nts come a little too quick in rythem. Maybe you should revise it a bit so it doesn't sound so quick. Kairi's death should be MUCH more painful than that anyways! But other than the pure quickness it was good. But i cannot stress this one point enough...MURDER KAIRI SLOWER! Stab her in the gut or something so shes gurgling in the background.