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a very great love scene, very nice with good detail and attention to feelings. why oh why did you have to end it on such a bummer though

HOW DAREST THY!!! End my lovely fanfic??? NOOOO How could you??? *sob* Its so GREAT!! I LOOOOVE it!!! HURRY UP AND UPDATE! I LURVIES IT! ^__^

Ohh my gosh. I found your story last night when i couldnt fall asleep, and ended up staying up way later thanntenntended to read it. This story has amazing details and is really origional. I really like how riku feels for sora and vise versa. so cutee!!! :) keep writing, PLEASE!!!! :D


xo;Alicia

*fans hands at face, trying to cool myself down, and takes a clothe to wipe the sweat off body* This was so intense and I felt the heat rise!! I never wanted it to end!! Oh wow, I can't wait to read more. I love this story so much. It is incredible!!!! Chapter 7 is the bene sne so far, I think. I could really picture the scene. I could picture the emotions, and movements perfectly. I practically felt like they did. I can't get enough of this story!!!!! You better update this soon, real soon!!!!!
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P.S. I am totally head-over-heels for this story, and Riku (if you didn't guess)=P

omgsh! you stopped it there! WHY?!?!?!?!?! they're gonna admit their feelings! DAMN KAIRI! T.T ... um.. update please?!

Though I'm not really into the Sora/Riku paring, I like this! The AU-ness of it makes it seem like a story all by itself! 5 stars :D! Please continue!

oh poor riku! he's atkastkast T.T i feel so bad for him.. gah.. well i hope he confronts his feelings about sora real soon! ^^

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!! It was so kawaiiiii!!!!! It was getting pretty hot at the end too. I still get chills thinking about it. Wow!!! I can't wait till you get more of it up. I really want to see some more Sora/Riku!!!!!! I hope that bitch Kairi really gets what she deserves too. I really hate her!!
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im luven the story more an more!!! hope u'll update soon. ^^

OH...MY....WOW!!! I don't really know what to say. this was an incredible chapter. I LOVED it!!! It was so cute and I could feel my heart race just picturing what was going on. I love what's going on between the two. It is so sweet how close they're getting and the effort Sora is putting in towards helping Riku. I have never read a story quite like this. It is most certainly one of my favs. I can't wait to read more!!!
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