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You've got me interested in mermaids again... XD ::has the urge to read mermaid fic now::

I love your story!! It's so cute when sora and riku interact!! hope you update soon! my choice for what happens next would probably be riku and hav have a nt tnt together...can't wait four nur next chapter!! =)

Okay, I think what I like most about your story is the rich atmosphere and culture you've given the merepeople. It feels like they really ex and and it only helps that there's different species of them. Oh, that's another thing I liked ^-^. The names for thefereferent species. They're descriptive and fit the personality types well. But I am curious as to how Squall got a sword without being able to forge one (unless there's some kinda thing that burns underwater that I don't know about), but hey, it's not that big a deal ^-^. I can't wait for the next chapter and I vote for choice number A! Ja ne!

ohh... hehe i just started comming to this site after a good author got a story removed from the original FF.net that i really liked. Any ways, ill vote for letter C. happy writing,
Obsessive Yaoifangrl Mandi

God DAMNIT! Can't we just mix C and A? Maybe have Riku and Sora have a moment THEN have it broken up by the Razorback attack? Then I would get the 'nummy Cloud/Leon backstory.... anyway. The review:
I like the concpt behind this story. LOVE how Kari, for now, is on the 'bad' side. But....it's a little slow. I stopped reading for a while, did a couple things, then came back. The text is also very simple. Not in a bad way neccisaily. But a broader vocabulary might help the story flow a little easier. Well, that's my bit.
Chao~

I really like. Really Really A lot. Its a great idea put to good use with a decent baclground story. I would like to know what happened with Leon and Cloud, but I would also like some more Riku/Sora action too. And I'm wondering how Kairi is going to fit into this story. Please write another chapter soon.

Mmmm.. I definietly like how you did the switch. Most people would've done the cliche` of having Sora run into Riku first, then see Leon... I like that you switched it. Adds a bit of difference... I'd take choice A...

Wow! I really enjoyed this chapter! I loved the scene between Sora and Leon, and between Sora and Riku. They are just so cute!!! I vote for all the choices. They could all be connected very easily and would make a great chapter or two. I'm really hoping to see mor!Sor Sora/Riku and Cloud/Leon. This is certainly my fav story so far. Keep up the great work and pdate soon!!!
Twinstar1 ^.~

RAZORFIN ATTACK!!!! RAZORFIN ATTACK!!!!
XD
i choose A!!
*bounces*

^_^ oh wow, I like it so far, that I do. I'm rooting for C. ^_^ I'm all for some shonen-ai. But another one of the choices could be tied into C. like Kairi seed them during their moment. Or Leon/Cloud see their moment. I'm not really leaning for the Razorback attack though. But I'm all for the rest. kay kay update soon. (I'll be checking)