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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mark Drowkiller nods. "Good style. Needs more paladin." he smiles and runs off to buy flashlight batteries.
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The classic well written D&D story, otherwise I like that you used Italian words and frases (even, if badly spelled and linked, but it's good). Continue!
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May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice fic. It looks like you put a alot of thought into this one. But there are some probs. First the layout is a little hard to follow andalso sometimes its hard tot ell who is talking. So maybe givingit a new layout would help. Other than that its a good story and seems to be headedto a nice kickarse plot.