rate_review Reviews

OMG. STICK WITH ONE VOICE PLEASE. Switching from first-person the third-person and back again is confusing, and poor writing.

Seriously hope there is going to be more, this is so well written and chalkfull of gooey dark angst. This is actually the second time Ive read it since a while back, I hope it can be updated eventually, *sniffle* poor sweet Lucca

^^ Very good. Marle/Crono is such a boring combo, its in the game but it's still boring, so this is quite intruiging. I do not like the word 'cum' but all-and-all, your wording was perfecto. Do not take my little word blurt there. >.< I'm just being picky.

Wow ^_^ really a great Lucca POV, it's just the way she would have said it too! Marle is evil, proposing a party 20 minutes after Lucca almost gets raped. Lucca should SO keep Crono.

Oh wow... Poor Lucca, she's my favorite CT character too... And I do find crono/lucca as a good pairing as long as they aren't kids when they're paired =P

But wow, those are some nicely done nightmares. Hehe, I enjoy writing a good nightmare. <.< >.>

Please write more, you are awesome! *gets a stadium of people together to give applause*