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for Desert Heat

by iztayultepes

person blazing-wolf-08 (not signed in)
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely written. There were a few grammer mistakes where words were clumped together and attatched to another word. But it was really good all together. The way that you tilted personalites a bit to fit into this writing style was nice. The story was a sweet one and it had a nice ending to it. You have a very unique and interesting writing style ^^ I like it X3~
person Someoneyoumightremember
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Will you stop it with these horrible, horrible yaoi things?

...

At least make the characters as IC as possible, like you used to.

=P

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