rate_review Reviews

I demand more chapters! Or at least a sequel! Too good beginning to just leave it here like this.

This was HAWT!!! I felt bad for Azrael, but it still made me wet. Are you going to write a second chapter? Like... maybe during the SR1 era maybe before or after Raziel fights Kain in Sanctuary he could find Azrael.... if you write it a certain way it could be *quite* an interesting chapter (laughs wickedly). And your english was just fine in my opinion. I've seen waaaaay worse. I noticed a few errors but they were undoubtedly aused by the sucky formatting that plagues everyone on aff. All in all, I think you've done a great job with this.

And by the way, thankies for your review on Soul of the Reaver! It was very much appriciated.

.....wonderfull i dont think i've ever been more turned on in my life LOL....its terrible...im so dirty....lol