rate_review Reviews

Awesome! I like the ending for this one much better than the "cummy version"; it's much sexier, much more tactile, and the end twist is funny. The "cummy version" was just rather disturbing. I mean, it wasn't offensive or anything, but it feels like a first draft thing, with the "normal version" being the revised and improved product!

Anyway, the general story is excellent, an honest depiction of a naughty fantasy that manages to be both humorous and genuinely arousing. Good work; I'd have to say that aside from the seminal "Homecoming", this is your best work.