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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, not bad at all. Very well written (despite a few typos here and there) and a great pairing. I'd like to see a pairing of Issac and Mia, as a continuation to this story. Like, a chapter two.
I liked your use of description, used it wisely and only where it needed to be used, I'm rather impressed.
I liked your use of description, used it wisely and only where it needed to be used, I'm rather impressed.