rate_review Reviews

Its easier to read it if you seperate each dialog line so we know whos talking.

eh...it was alright...the sex was okay, but the format just burned my eyes out. break a space when you have a new speaker, kay?

can you please write a chapter about Kratos and Raine?

Genis and Presea are my fav too. I always use one of them when I play the game. I can't wait for the next part. : )

Ugh, not sexy. Poor syntax, worse diction.

great story make it a threesome next.

I read all the chapters and I kept reading #3 and that is by far the best chapter I read since I started reading chapter 1. Overall, there is humor in there which I like all fanfics like this to have...not too much but enough on the 'pleasing the reader' scale to please anyone reading. And the story, it was detailed well and I cried several times. Im a big fan of the game and you did it with such passion and romance. I hope your next chapter will be promising and great as the first three. You did well. Very well. #3 is the best you came up with. *uber applause*

Very good writing, keep it up, I really enjoyed the first and third stories

Hey,how about Regal/Alicia before she turns into a monster?

oooooooh. or maybe a long excerpt of the convict when he's masturbating ( in EXTREME detail). hehehe