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June 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aww will you continue this!!!! PLEASE!!!!
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I... I hate you, I seriously do. Not only is this a Mary-Sue INFESTED fic but this is also terrible as well. I can't believe you would stoop so low as to pair up my favorite character Vin with one of your horrid Sues. Vin would NOT bone a 19 year old, he has more diginty then that. My eyes are offically scarred just because of your shitty story. Do me a flavor and please get rid of it or fix it.
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. *waits patiently for the next chapter*
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
come on update....i want to see dax and tess.....:thinks about it:......yeah lol update
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January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how about no?
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January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude! you have to post the next chapter!
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December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Are you familiar with the term "Mary-Sue"?
Because, yeah.
Because, yeah.
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December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must be honest when i say this, but this isn't very good. I'm not being mean, but these stories are out of character, and no one really cares about non-Jak characters that YOU made up to pair them with. The story also shifts so much that it makes no sense. Yatto just... runs away from Jak? that's it? I seriously hope this is your first hentai fic.