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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Welcome back into the writing buisness! It's been a while since we've heard from you! I'm glad your back in writing, you left us all in a cliffhanger with that last chapter. I was all like, 'Woah! What's gonna happen next?!' Well, anyways, welcome back and I hope to see more from you!
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay!! update. ^_^ this is such a good fic. although, Riku being the bad guy still makes me sad...but thats just my Riku fangirlness kicking in. i LOVE the characterization of Cloud and Squall and their relationship, freakin awesome. rock on!
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!!! XD
its got humour, romance, drama...everything i love...especially the humour and smut ^_______^
this is another wonderful chapter. i hope you update soon!!! i really cant wait to read the next chapter!!! GANBATTE!!! =D
its got humour, romance, drama...everything i love...especially the humour and smut ^_______^
this is another wonderful chapter. i hope you update soon!!! i really cant wait to read the next chapter!!! GANBATTE!!! =D
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You've updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *crys tears of joy* I love you!!!!!!!! Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really can't wait to know what shit Squall has gotten him and Sora in to!!!!!!!!! Thank you!!!!!!!!!!
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! T_T u actually updated! I was spazzin when i saw that it was updated!Love this Chapter too. I can feel the drama coming but really what will hapen to sora? will he go with riku? Squall? I cant wait for the next chaPter!!!! I cant remember the number of times i read tis fanfiction all the way throught so yeah UPDATE SOON!!!
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit, you're back! Awesome chapter!
I really liked the awakard, fluffy wake up scene. It was absolutely perfect. And when Squall said Sora's name at the end of the chapter, I had an 'oh shit' moment. All I could think was 'Riku's mom went to a bible retreat with Aerith, oh shit, Sora's screwed!' I'm also getting this weird feeling Riku's going to try to blame Jake's break down on Squall. Please, tell me I'm wrong. Please.
I really liked the awakard, fluffy wake up scene. It was absolutely perfect. And when Squall said Sora's name at the end of the chapter, I had an 'oh shit' moment. All I could think was 'Riku's mom went to a bible retreat with Aerith, oh shit, Sora's screwed!' I'm also getting this weird feeling Riku's going to try to blame Jake's break down on Squall. Please, tell me I'm wrong. Please.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*dies* There are no words . . .
I found this story not too long ago and even though I'm not much of a ditzy!Tidus fan, I quickly realized his humor was class clown-type humor rather than just walking stupidity. I honestly would have been rolling on the floor crying if there hadn't been armrests on my chair. Other random moments between characters or a character's internal thoughts tickled as well.
I'm glad you haven't made Kairi a psycho-slut-jealous-bitch type. So often she's used as a device to get Riku and Sora together and while some can write that relatively well, it does get old. Kairi being portrayed as a normal teenage girl is a relief to read.
The biggest thing I saved for last. When I discovered this fic I wasn't a Squall/Sora fan and I was sort of leery about reading it even though there was also Riku/Sora. However, the dynamic between Squall and Sora--first slowly getting to know one another and then realizing that they had developed feelings for each other also--is wonderful and I began to WANT them to get together. "Stolen Comfort" made me very happy, because I probably could not have handled reading all of that tension only to have it end on some kind of strange or teasing cliffhanger.
I was almost afraid to read "The Aftermath" because I didn't want the 'morning after' to be full of pointless tension just to stretch the story out. I couldn't help myself, though--NOT reading it would have been worse. I'm a romantic at heart, so I was very pleased with how things turned out.
Sephiroth's reasoning behind having wealth made me roll my eyes and smile because it just FIT. That's the only way I can explain it.
. . . I suppose that's all. Keep up the FANTASTIC work and I'll definitely be keeping my eye out for future updates!!
~LS
I found this story not too long ago and even though I'm not much of a ditzy!Tidus fan, I quickly realized his humor was class clown-type humor rather than just walking stupidity. I honestly would have been rolling on the floor crying if there hadn't been armrests on my chair. Other random moments between characters or a character's internal thoughts tickled as well.
I'm glad you haven't made Kairi a psycho-slut-jealous-bitch type. So often she's used as a device to get Riku and Sora together and while some can write that relatively well, it does get old. Kairi being portrayed as a normal teenage girl is a relief to read.
The biggest thing I saved for last. When I discovered this fic I wasn't a Squall/Sora fan and I was sort of leery about reading it even though there was also Riku/Sora. However, the dynamic between Squall and Sora--first slowly getting to know one another and then realizing that they had developed feelings for each other also--is wonderful and I began to WANT them to get together. "Stolen Comfort" made me very happy, because I probably could not have handled reading all of that tension only to have it end on some kind of strange or teasing cliffhanger.
I was almost afraid to read "The Aftermath" because I didn't want the 'morning after' to be full of pointless tension just to stretch the story out. I couldn't help myself, though--NOT reading it would have been worse. I'm a romantic at heart, so I was very pleased with how things turned out.
Sephiroth's reasoning behind having wealth made me roll my eyes and smile because it just FIT. That's the only way I can explain it.
. . . I suppose that's all. Keep up the FANTASTIC work and I'll definitely be keeping my eye out for future updates!!
~LS
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes u updated!! well seip-whatever his name is isn't a asshole. But well he took Riku's attraction alot better than expected. But if I were Sora I'd never forgive him! I mean he sletp with Jake and turned him into a horny crazed jock-strap. Anyway Leon you gorgeous twit! Don't mention Sora's name! *tries to hit him with a pillow* Well I'm so glad you updated this fic I love it! Hurry with the next chapters plz!! ^^
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy wow. It's alive! Yay! ^_^