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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still wont let me log in ;---;
I love you! OMG I LOVE YOU! This story was damn excellent! It's like...woah and WOAH and then WOOOOAAAAAAH!!! Please update soon! I'm so happy you like SoraXLeon I've been dying to read a GOOD one for a long time.
Your story was EXCELLENT...except the fact that for when I was RIGHT about to finish it my mom was all "Let me see what you're reading" -errrr- okaaay...>__> Weird parents I have....
I almost miss school >__>
I love your writing...absolutely. You're an excellent writer ^__^ I'm linking all of my friends to this story. :: hugs:: BEAUTIFUL WRITING!
AIRIE
I love you! OMG I LOVE YOU! This story was damn excellent! It's like...woah and WOAH and then WOOOOAAAAAAH!!! Please update soon! I'm so happy you like SoraXLeon I've been dying to read a GOOD one for a long time.
Your story was EXCELLENT...except the fact that for when I was RIGHT about to finish it my mom was all "Let me see what you're reading" -errrr- okaaay...>__> Weird parents I have....
I almost miss school >__>
I love your writing...absolutely. You're an excellent writer ^__^ I'm linking all of my friends to this story. :: hugs:: BEAUTIFUL WRITING!
AIRIE
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fuck this story is awesome! You've done an extreme job with it! Jake's suicide..never saw that one coming (i thought he was gonna shoot Sora!>_<) I love Sora's characterization and how all the little pieces keep fitting together. When Yuffie mentioned the ''hot guy'' Sora came into the store with I thought I was gonna crap myself laughing! Can't wait to see how Sora will react when he finally meets Cloud and Totally can't wait for the next update...
-Karis
-Karis
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^ perfect so far update soon!
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Write more!!! I love this. My girlfriend even sit next to me and started reading it with me. We both loved it so much we were disappointed that it ended at only chapter 15. Please write more. I'd hardly gotten through chapter 7 and I knew that I just HAD to review this story. The lemon was HOT. *Grins* But anyways, enjoy your "semester off" (refer to end of chapter 15) and WMS (WriteMoreSoon) ^.^
-.~La-Reina
Ja Ne!! =[^.^]=
-.~La-Reina
Ja Ne!! =[^.^]=
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh god, a non anime or original that i LOVE!!!!!!!! oh hell, you have to email me when you update...PLEASE!?!?!?!!?!?!!??!?!?!?! thank you soooo much!!!!
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! You updated ^^.....just hope is has a happy eneding..ya i know you said it wouldn't but still can hope
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see an update. I had forgotten about this story. I'm interested to see if Sora is serious about breaking things off with Riku or if things will get sorted out.
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Phew, I just read all 15 chapters... and I'm beat... Your story ain't as streesful and dark as a few other stories I know, but it still makes my mind spin. Okay...hehheh... review... Well, first of all, I like your name. Sephiroth can't have enough stalkers...*nodnod*
Second; I'm a big Riku-fan (must be my FF/KH bishie obsession) but the one you gave character can die for all I care... What a selfish self-obsessed rat! Geez, the way he kept pushing Sora annoyed the hell out of me. I did laugh when I read Vincent wouldn't mind humping the kid. But honest, this Riku is mentally unstable.
Also Seamour as a pizza delivery boy?! For some odd reason I could not picture that... Well, I tried but it looked ridiculous and kind of scary.
And Squall... he's my hero. There were a lot of 'jump Sora' moments, which I loved... I don't really know why, but Squall is just great. Once you get (or melt) that iceberg out of his ass (which Sora did), you wanna jump and cuddle him... <3
Also Cloud. In the FF I find the guy so cranky I want to hit him with his bustersword, heck even shove it somehwere, but the Cloud in the story made me laugh a couple of times. Geez, is he so scared of Squall he ends up cracking his skull on various places? *snickers*
In the beginning I never really understood why you placed a 'Jake' in the story. I couldn't find any info on a Jake in the FF-stories. For a moment I was 'Oh my god, an author adding own characters', but that quickly died when I read the guy had a purpose: Blowing his brains out with a gun.
The sarcasm and inner thoughts are great. I never really read a story that uses a lot of inner thoughts and stuff. It gives readers a view on things and peoples real emotions. Anyways the upcoming writing will probably take you a while... I hope the plot doesn't water down. I really, really wanna read more... Especially more Squall/Sora. I never liked the pairing, but after reading this story, I do... *gives a cookie*
Anthing negative I should review on.... yes, fear me right now... *polishes pitchfork* Naeh, I should probably read all 15 chapters again to find something I dislike... Oh yeah, the 'No pain while having sex' annoyed me a bit. I mean, Sora should've at least mentioned he was in pain when entered. The only one mentioning possible pain was Squall. The limping (Sora did) made it up a bit...
My big question is; What will Riku do when he finds out his lil' Sora is no longer a virgin and feels more safe in the arms of his English teacher...? *shudders* ooooh, angst! *cheers* I love angst.
I guess here my inane ranting ends. Keep up the good work. I'm curious when the next chapter will come up.
ja ne ^^V
Second; I'm a big Riku-fan (must be my FF/KH bishie obsession) but the one you gave character can die for all I care... What a selfish self-obsessed rat! Geez, the way he kept pushing Sora annoyed the hell out of me. I did laugh when I read Vincent wouldn't mind humping the kid. But honest, this Riku is mentally unstable.
Also Seamour as a pizza delivery boy?! For some odd reason I could not picture that... Well, I tried but it looked ridiculous and kind of scary.
And Squall... he's my hero. There were a lot of 'jump Sora' moments, which I loved... I don't really know why, but Squall is just great. Once you get (or melt) that iceberg out of his ass (which Sora did), you wanna jump and cuddle him... <3
Also Cloud. In the FF I find the guy so cranky I want to hit him with his bustersword, heck even shove it somehwere, but the Cloud in the story made me laugh a couple of times. Geez, is he so scared of Squall he ends up cracking his skull on various places? *snickers*
In the beginning I never really understood why you placed a 'Jake' in the story. I couldn't find any info on a Jake in the FF-stories. For a moment I was 'Oh my god, an author adding own characters', but that quickly died when I read the guy had a purpose: Blowing his brains out with a gun.
The sarcasm and inner thoughts are great. I never really read a story that uses a lot of inner thoughts and stuff. It gives readers a view on things and peoples real emotions. Anyways the upcoming writing will probably take you a while... I hope the plot doesn't water down. I really, really wanna read more... Especially more Squall/Sora. I never liked the pairing, but after reading this story, I do... *gives a cookie*
Anthing negative I should review on.... yes, fear me right now... *polishes pitchfork* Naeh, I should probably read all 15 chapters again to find something I dislike... Oh yeah, the 'No pain while having sex' annoyed me a bit. I mean, Sora should've at least mentioned he was in pain when entered. The only one mentioning possible pain was Squall. The limping (Sora did) made it up a bit...
My big question is; What will Riku do when he finds out his lil' Sora is no longer a virgin and feels more safe in the arms of his English teacher...? *shudders* ooooh, angst! *cheers* I love angst.
I guess here my inane ranting ends. Keep up the good work. I'm curious when the next chapter will come up.
ja ne ^^V
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(More review, because AFF cut the last one off *growl*)
Also Cloud. In the FF I find the guy so cranky I want to hit him with his bustersword, heck even shove it somehwere, but the Cloud in the story made me laugh a couple of times. Geez, is he so scared of Squall he ends up cracking his skull on various places? *snickers*
In the beginning I never really understood why you placed a 'Jake' in the story. I couldn't find any info on a Jake in the FF-stories. For a moment I was 'Oh my god, an author adding own characters', but that quickly died when I read the guy had a purpose: Blowing his brains out with a gun.
The sarcasm and inner thoughts are great. I never really read a story that uses a lot of inner thoughts and stuff. It gives readers a view on things and peoples real emotions. Anyways the upcoming writing will probably take you a while... I hope the plot doesn't water down. I really, really wanna read more... Especially more Squall/Sora. I never liked the pairing, but after reading this story, I do... *gives a cookie*
Anthing negative I should review on.... yes, fear me right now... *polishes pitchfork* Naeh, I should probably read all 15 chapters again to find something I dislike... Oh yeah, the 'No pain while having sex' annoyed me a bit. I mean, Sora should've at least mentioned he was in pain when entered. The only one mentioning possible pain was Squall. The limping (Sora did) made it up a bit...
My big question is; What will Riku do when he finds out his lil' Sora is no longer a virgin and feels more safe in the arms of his English teacher...? *shudders* ooooh, angst! *cheers* I love angst.
I guess here my inane ranting ends. Keep up the good work. I'm curious when the next chapter will come up.
ja ne ^^V
Also Cloud. In the FF I find the guy so cranky I want to hit him with his bustersword, heck even shove it somehwere, but the Cloud in the story made me laugh a couple of times. Geez, is he so scared of Squall he ends up cracking his skull on various places? *snickers*
In the beginning I never really understood why you placed a 'Jake' in the story. I couldn't find any info on a Jake in the FF-stories. For a moment I was 'Oh my god, an author adding own characters', but that quickly died when I read the guy had a purpose: Blowing his brains out with a gun.
The sarcasm and inner thoughts are great. I never really read a story that uses a lot of inner thoughts and stuff. It gives readers a view on things and peoples real emotions. Anyways the upcoming writing will probably take you a while... I hope the plot doesn't water down. I really, really wanna read more... Especially more Squall/Sora. I never liked the pairing, but after reading this story, I do... *gives a cookie*
Anthing negative I should review on.... yes, fear me right now... *polishes pitchfork* Naeh, I should probably read all 15 chapters again to find something I dislike... Oh yeah, the 'No pain while having sex' annoyed me a bit. I mean, Sora should've at least mentioned he was in pain when entered. The only one mentioning possible pain was Squall. The limping (Sora did) made it up a bit...
My big question is; What will Riku do when he finds out his lil' Sora is no longer a virgin and feels more safe in the arms of his English teacher...? *shudders* ooooh, angst! *cheers* I love angst.
I guess here my inane ranting ends. Keep up the good work. I'm curious when the next chapter will come up.
ja ne ^^V
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keep up the good work i really likethis fanfic
keep going!!!!
keep going!!!!