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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has to be a troll, heh. I love the title to chapter five, by the way.
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Use proper grammar please.
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is gay
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alright...I know this is "fiction"...but...how can a severed cock ejaculate without the balls still attached to it? Explain, EXPLAIN!
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fuck you.
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO!!!!!!1
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
With spelling that bad, this can't be anything other than a prank. You seriously expect this to be passable as a story?
Dear me, we have a lot to learn, don't we?
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
I don't think this could BE much worse.
I don't think this could BE much worse.
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I concur with the other reviewers. This is bad, very bad. Spellcheck, and a beta reader would help.
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January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is just... tripe. Please come back when you actually understand the canon, the English language, and basic physics for real life. In the meantime, this site's already fouled enough.