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September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ugh! You have gotta be kidding me! You haven't updated this story in years???? Well i am reviewing and pleading with ya to update. Please????
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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dude keep on truckin ... caugh caugh i mean keep it up...
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think you've got something. A bare thread of plot that could become great. keep going, don't stop now.
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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what? is that it? THAT CANT BE IT!!
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great job so far, but where's the rest?
Update soon!
Update soon!
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, kinda has a sad atmosphere to it, ne? *grin* love the story so far, please update soon.
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February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What's taking so #&%$ long for you to update!?
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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting what-if'
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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...I hope this ends well. Update soon, please!
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice, it took me a few minuets to figure out which Jak and Daxter game it was but I like it. I hope Jak is gonna give some heat to poor Daxter soon *snickers*. Please, update!