rate_review Reviews

LIKED IT ^^^^^^^^^^^

Very nice! I really enjoyed reading your story because it was poetic, hot, but still poetic. You have a very good command of the English language, and I am totally loving the elevated diction.

* Crying And Screaming * NOOOOOOOOO! RIKU! * Puts Magnum44 To Authour's Head * If You Harm Him You Have Just Dug Your Own Grave. My Assassin Mr.K Shall See To Your Slow And Painful Death! K:"Ill Do What Now?" Me:"Claude! Here, Heres Your Magnum Back Now Kill Her She Has Riku Hostage!" K:"Baby, You Know Im "K" When Im Working" Me:"K, Schmaye. Now Shoot Her!" K:" Awww C'mon,call Me K!" Me:" * In Slutry Tone * Please K Save Rik... I Mean Judy In A Riku Costum From The Authour?" K:" What?! Its My Judy I Have To Save Her!" * Shoots Randomly At Authour And Saves Riku * K:" Oh Judy!! You Silly Pussycat You Always Make Me Save You" Riku:"Pussycat?" K:"Oh Judy Stop Playing Hard To Get Let Me Get You Out Of This Costume" Riku:"Judy? Costume? Whoa! Stop Undressing Me! Im A Dude!" K:" Oh Judy You Really When All Out Getting A Sex Change,plastic Surgury And Cutting And Dying You Hair For Me!" Riku:" Dude Are You Fucking Nuts?! My Name Is Riku And Stop Touching Me There!" * I Sit Back Watching K Rape Riku * Great Story.

EXCELLENT!!!

*is drooling*

Please...keep writing

I thought it was really good! good job for you! I love this fandom...

I love your fic! It was so hot in a tastefull way.

This story....ROCKED! Omg, you rule!! ^_^ Make a sequeal on where Cloud was going, like, off to screw with Vincent (droooool) or even Squall! (double drooooool) That'd be great. (daydreams)

Jesus christ that was hot. Although both characters were a little out of character.

:standing in awe, waving good-bye to something: Bye, bye innocence. @_@ I wuved it...good first person. :nodnod: Sora gives this fic...twenty golden stars!