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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Been a fan of this series for quite a while and noticed I forgot to add a review here. My favorite part is 3 since it's just smokin hot all over, especially the last few pages or so. Hoping for some anal, maybe a threesome or simply the return of Zeal (unfortunately not a big fan of Lucca) in the next one. Thumbs up!
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great!!!!
keep up with it!
keep up with it!
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I been keeping up with this story since you first posted it in 2005 or so. I really like it. I even read some chapters twice just for kicks. I wish you would update a bit faster though. the gap between 2-3 was torture! Oh well! Keep up the good work and I will check back later.
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:D write more. This is definetly one of the better, if not best stories for Chrono :)
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February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, an update! I'd given up hope. I read this back when you published it, and I'm glad to see you haven't given up on it! Can't wait for more!
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, interesting story! This has potential to be a very good tale, but I identify with it being challenging to right. I think you've done a good job keeping that tension there and making Marle's predicament believable. I liked it, and look forward to where you take it.
-RB9
-RB9
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I feel dumb, typo's in my last review! Looking over what others say, I also want to add some of my own biases/requests- MIND CONTROL MAGIC!
Cheers,
-RB9
Cheers,
-RB9
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God Damn this is excellent...best premise ever, Zeal is very hot. You should include Ayla and Lucca, too! And I also vote for anal!
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, please update! We need more non yaoi CT fics.
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August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice stuff. But this need more chapters!