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June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit I think I'm going to need some more vodka! wow, just wow. Interesting premise, well executed procession, standard format. There were a few spelling errors, nothing to much to complain about, though, in the first chapter, I think you may have accidently left out a word, in the first paragraph about taking a shower, you're missing needed, "after a long day she a long shower to relieve herself" well, that wasn't exactly the exact phrase, but you see the problem there?
Anyways, fixe that little sucker and I'll change my 9.8 to a 10, and throw in few bottles of vodka on the house. Das Vedanyas, this is CrazyIvan, signing off for now.
Anyways, fixe that little sucker and I'll change my 9.8 to a 10, and throw in few bottles of vodka on the house. Das Vedanyas, this is CrazyIvan, signing off for now.