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Interesting. Although I am quite disappointed in the turns of events...XD Ah well, I hope Venom somehow gets back to Axl. I really enjoyed those two together. ~Grins sheepishly~

Hey! I finally managed to catch up on this story and Culmination (somewhat). You're probably one of only two writers I know that can actually make me tolerate and even like Ky Kiske. And I love the interaction between Venom and Axl. I'm going to start calling him "Venny" from now on. Here's to waiting for the next installment! :)

Impressive, this was very well written, with an intelligent plot to boot. I like it. The only qualm I have, and mind you this is only my personal prejudice, was that Anji kissed Baiken. I hate that guy with an unhealthy passion. I hope he gets sodomized by Potemkin or get stabbed in the ass by Faust with that one special move I forget. Then gets his cock sliced off by someone, anyone. He looks like a gay nerd on steroids. How dare he dress like that and pass off as being straight! Err...sorry, that was kinda out of hand. *ROFL* I think I'm going write a fic with him getting tortured now XD. Thanks for the umm...inspiration I guess.

Ooooh so interesting. I love it! But, I noticed a small error. Faust isn't a measely seven foot something. He's exactly 9'3" XD. Meaning Axl would have been close to sh**ing himself, I imagine.

I have to say I was thrilled to see a sequel to Culimation. You have single-handedly done what I thought was impossible, and that is to make me like Bridget. I have always enjoyed pummeling Bridget (usually with Ky, coincidentally, or Justice if I'm feeling spiteful). Yet as presented here, the expansion of the character has grown on me thoroughly, to the point where I no longer feel the need to be wrathful when concerning Bridget. That's just the tip of the iceberg. All of your character presentations are, in my eyes, flawless. I didn't think anyone could have that good a grasp on ALL the minds of the Guilty Gear characters, but clearly you've proven me wrong. Be it Johnny's sly nature or Zappa's outrageous activities, it's all spot-on. I didn't even care for Axl that much, but he's starting to grow on me with your writing. Go figure. I was even leery about any remote pairing of Ky and Testament. Again, the excellent execution of your writing proved me wrong. I must say that you're doing a great job with continuing to develop their relationship.

I could rant and rave (in the good way) about all the wonderful things about Culmination and Thunder Falling as it develops for a good while, but I'll cut it short. To say you're on the right track would be a vast understatement. Thank you for sharing your spectacular stories with us. ^_^/)

You have no idea how much I look forward to every chapter of this story. ^_^

HI! This is really cool! You must update it, and fix one of your chapters...i think its...seven? I dont remember, but it was from Culmination. I think you uploaded the wrong story. No smut yet...I'm so sad...Ky and Testament keep getting interupted. I think Venom should get over Zato and start dating Axl. Wouldnt that be cute? I like this fic, so update! ~Laz

Hey, I’ve actually been to your web site long before I saw you posting here, but since i didn't review then, I will now. I really love your stories. At first I was skeptical about the pairing, but I find it really works the way you've written it. There's not a lot of fanfiction with an interesting and well thought out plot, so I congratulate you. I'm on chapter five from the sequel and I really look forward to you're up dating soon.