rate_review Reviews

I think that you need Metal to fall in love with someone.. not have sex.. but fall in love..

Someone needs to mend his angasty heart. ;_;

Metal:Nuuuuuuuuuuuu!!I shall not become a vibrator!! No! NO!! *runs away*

XD YAY!!!! keep goin'!...oops, already knew that! ^^;; (just a lil hyper tonight) oh & about my request, it was more of a suggetion to u & if u wanted to use it, but i wounldn't mind it all the same. *smirks* hurry up with the next chap!!!! *~* Kitty

TS:Zomg!! What a lovrley fic you have!! Horray for Orgy!!!
Chaos:*enters and notices TS* ...Who the hell are you? How the hell did you get in here?
TS:... I don't really know. I found this fic. and I liked the first chapter, so I read it, and read it, and read it, an-
Chaos:.. you.. you read the story?
TS: YES!! It's so frikkin brilliant!! I love teh gangbang.. =3
Chaos:....*twitch*
TS:I lurve Metal Sonic the most for some reason. Maybe cause he's a robot.. I like robots.. n.n
Chaos:...
TS:and I like teh gangbang. and I like Shadow, and Knuckles, and Espio, and Son-
Chaos:-WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WILL YOU PEOPLE??!! WHY THE HELL DO YOU READ THIS??! WHY THE HELL AM I GETTING GANGBANGED??!!WHY DOES METAL SONIC LOOK LIKE A FRENCH MAID?!?! WHY!!?
TS:I dunno.. go ask CC13..
Chaos:*runs of screaming something about boston cream pie*
TS:.. -.-;;;
*for some random reason, Metal Sonic appears*
Metal:???
TS:0.0.. *sqeels like a giddy school girl*(which she is) OHMYGAWD..
Metal:Here it comes...
TS:METAL!! ZOMG I LURV YOU!!OH MY GAWD I CAN- *hypervanalates(sp)*
Metal:Er.. You ok?
TS: Ack.. *cough cough* *weezes* Yeah.. now that your here..
Metal:... -.-'
TS:No really, I have good news for you!!
Metal:?
TS:CC13 has enspired meh to create a slash/love fic between you and Shadow!!
Metal:........
*There is an akward silance*
TS:.. What do ya think of that?
Metal:*twitchs*.. Er.. what does slash meen exactly?
TS:Ok. lemme put it this way. It's two males.. that are in love(at least I think so)/and or fall in love with each other. That would be you and Shadow.
Metal:...the Hedgehog?
TS:Yup.
Metal:The one that kicked my ass in Sonic Heros?
TS:Yup.
Metal:The one that can fly?
TS:uh.. I don't thing he can fly Metal..
Metal:*twitches violently* Is there anything else you wish to tell me?
TS:Yup. I wanted to tell you that in CC13's story. You are a dressed up french maid, you have to do anything/everything Sonic and co. say, And Japanese school girls think your kawaii.
Metal:... DANGER-DANGER OVERLOAD. CAN.. NOT.. COMPUTE..*he faints*
TS:... Err.. thatsmyreviewireallyloveyourstorycc13keepitup*runs off to create her story*

As Syberfox says: "Steal my idea and die bitches =D"

No. Really.

You turned Chaos into a homosexual prostitute?! . . . . . . sweet. This story is so damn funny as well. *sigh* I'm going to read on now.

HAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love the fic! its VERY interesting'. :P hehehehe more orgy will ya! & i have an idea for a foursome (i found the idea in a fanfic i read last year), have 2 people in a 69 position (i'm thinkin' Chaos should be one of 'em) suckin' eahother off & then have 1 person behind "6" fuckin' em & 1 behind "9" doin' the same thin', there a foursome. or maybe 1 person behind the 1 fuckin' "6" & 1 behind the 1 fuckin' "9" so u get a sixsome!! ^.^ OH! & could u maybe make ur lemons longer? i think that they're too short, there GREAT, but too short. *whines* - Kitty Cat

Great i want to read Knuckles fuck tails up his tight ass

w00 for simplicity!! *waves flag* All the threesomes and foursomes or however many people there are were getting complicated. XD Anyway... *points and laughs at Metal Sonic* Nyahahaha!! *pokepokepokepoke*
Hey, I hope Omochao stowed away in one of the suitcases or summat. It'd be no fun in Japan wivvout him. X)

I cast my vote for location A. Also I want to say this is an interesting fic. I've only recently gotten into Sonic slash and while my favorite pairings generally only involve Shadow and one of the others I am really enjoying your orgy sessions. Chaos is a fun character it seems. I would love to see their couplings get a little bit kinky, maybe food fetish or bondage or spanking or something, just to stir it up a bit, but ultimately whatever you write is still fun to read. Please keep at it.

i have to say A

Interesting...choas in a yaoi story o_O Heck choas in ANY story with sex in it! The scenes are tasteful and reminds me of the many sonic games ^_^;;; (*doesn't mention why she knows about anal sex*) Still I enjoy it and I would like to read more of it XP