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for The Sun and the Moon.

by Finality

person Eek
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"it was awsome just NeVER EVER DO SORA AND RIKKU
or else ur a gay fagg that neends to get his head out his ass"

I'm in complete agreement with this guy... XD

Awesome story.
person Saishoku
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was nice and I absolutely love your writing style! it's sweet! I am a big RikuxSora fan and absolutely despise SoraxKairi, RikuxKairi. But the way your writing flowed was great and made me forget the pairing of the story for a bit, there. I simply could not review this story because I didn't like the pairing could I? great job, heh.
person Silver_Slumber
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And yet another brillant story from you! Great job! I loved this one! I look forward to reading more of your stories, i shall go read the other ones you have written now ^^
person grmrshortyshort1
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its cool
but they didnt fuck hard enough

do some serious 5000 word sex scene
then talk to me about lemons
person gayficssuckass
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was awsome just NeVER EVER DO SORA AND RIKKU
or else ur a gay fagg that neends to get his head out his ass
person mysticneko
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked your story but I don't think the song worked very well with the story. I thought it interuped the mood.
person Anon
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really good story REALLY GOOD i think u could of left the song out though
person Metalheart
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What? No reviews yet? Injustice!
This story was well written and really beautiful. I'm hoping to see more of your work and that sneak peek looked promising (Metalheart=Huge Zexion fan! ^^)

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