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by Spire
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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it, i see Noob as a much darker character, but i can tell where you are trying to take it. You should elaborate on Smoke a little more, lord knows the mk crew wont, but its a good story
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue in the future.
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story.
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You haven't got the full potential out of your story, in the next chapter be more specific
and can i know who the couples are gonna be?
For the rest......good work for a "noob"
(get it noob like in Noob Saibot)
Lame joke i know
and can i know who the couples are gonna be?
For the rest......good work for a "noob"
(get it noob like in Noob Saibot)
Lame joke i know