rate_review Reviews

This is such a good story! Great plot and awesome characterization, it could very well be made into a Metal Gear game. I especially like how you handled the changing relationship between Dave and Hal, their interactions, everything that was said and left unsaid. I don't suppose you will be writing a sequel? Anyway, I read it all in one setting (the plot was simply captivating and I could not take my eyes off it) and really loved it. Please write more good stories in the future! ^__^