schedule
July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story fo far, I can't wait to see where this is going
schedule
March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You might want to ask for a beta. I'm willing to do it, since I'm on everyday, but yeah. "Wholly Shit" Is Holy Shit. And I see a lot of spelling mistakes, which could easily be fixed with a beta. ^_^ Lovely story though. Can't wait to read more!
schedule
March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great now update. I want action. :P
schedule
March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow....Very nice...and very real. Update soon.