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for Vergil remembers

by PandoraMasters

person Bhree
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice, not as hard as the other chapters. That bit about the cowboy killed me. X3...Cowboy.
person Iesha
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh is someone a little jealous???
person Lady
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Methinks he is jealous, Iesha. Yeah fan girls want to fuck half devils like Vergil. MUAHAHAHA!
person Iesha
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was cool!

“What a tight pussy you have here, Lady.”
“What a big cock you have, demon!”
That bit made me think of the Little Red Riding Hood story, lol. I never knew how wrong Little Red Riding Hood and the Big Bad Wolf could sound!

“You call yourself a demon? Do demons fuck like they’ve run out of batteries?” Ooh she's feisty!

"I’ll show you how a devil fucks, Lady.” Great line! I would LOVE to be shown that too! Ohh yes!!

I quite liked the ending of that chapter as well - very sweet and romantic.
person Kayin
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm a littler surprised at her behavoir but Vergil can be pretty insistant. Can't he...
person Kayin
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter but points off for the misleading title. Bad Pandora!
person Kayin
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HA! Fangirls wanna screw half-demons huh? Well they certainly don't last long do they? Bad choice girls. You only have yourselves to blame...
person Bustahead
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, what WAS Virgil gonna say to her at the end? (curious curious) Or maybe I'm just clueless.

I loved Lady's insult! About the batteries! Stroke of genius!
person sarahi
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aw!!!!! you know what i'm gonna say......i loved this chapter nice sweet end ^^ i loved it tell your friend thanks for whatever part he did...or she..?? well who cares..lol ok bye bye!!
person Bhree
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hawt Sexy! Best chapter yet. I'd say it's better than My Chemical Romance, but that wouldn't be much of a complement. Whahahaha!

Keep writing, I hope someday i can write smut like you can! XD

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