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for Jealousy

by hentaibubblehead

person Fluffy
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
X3 wheee!!! what a wonderful story!! i love how every thought Sora has leads to Riku being wonderful. keep up the wonderful work or i might have to hurt you.... +__+
person Sarah
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww, it's pretty darn cute =3

I love ^_^ *shall keep reading!*
person Sarah
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww!!! T_____T

That is so sad ;_;

I really like the POV changing though~ It's cool

Sora's thoughts are hilarious XDDDD

Keep updating! =3
person Sarah
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
U-waaah! I must read more!! x3;;;

Update soon~~ <3
person Laura-chan!
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
=P hey Ti-Ti-chan!! love the new chapter of your story, writey more! =D

Laura-chan! =D
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Silly Sora! He really is dense sometimes.. I hate Kairi! lalala!
person maria
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey this story is getting very interesting. keep it up. by the time u read this review u will be back from china. so how was ur trip? how is china like? n e ways update next chapter soon.
person Laura-Chan
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wheeeeeee!!!! i loved chapter 3 =D, Sora was described a little whoreish with the dog collar and leather jacket XD, keep writing! more *grins* i'll be waiting for you to come back from China ^_^

Laura chan



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Straight Jackets Rule!!!! =D
person mimi
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please write more chapter....n update soon k...thx
person T.K-kun
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi, hi. you finally updated! great job on this too! it goes smoothly like daily life
but not so boring, so it's all great! =D it's great riku is't so discouraged and is
willing to go on with persuing sora! i don't like the drama of riku maybe assuming
sora doesn't like im and all these things happen, blah blah blah. i'm a carefree
kind of person. ^^" hope you update a bit faster then before. haha, but don't
worry, i understand the writing life, i currently have two stories(one un published)
on hold.... i know it all in my head, i'm just not sure on better detail and stuff
DAMN MY LAZY-NESS! haha good luck on the next update. =)

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