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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, of course, you just fueled my little liking for Sora-torture. I blame it all on you! -points finger and laughs- ... Okay, maybe not but really, this fanfiction was excellently written. I look forward to your next stories now, as you have proved yourself a beautiful writer.
Though, even after all of this, I do have to say it was slightly OOC. -laughs- Nothing too bad but there are a few things Axel wanted to accomplish via using Sora before killing him off, I believe. And no, not of this nature. Not that I care. >w<;;
Though, even after all of this, I do have to say it was slightly OOC. -laughs- Nothing too bad but there are a few things Axel wanted to accomplish via using Sora before killing him off, I believe. And no, not of this nature. Not that I care. >w<;;
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY FUCKIN' SHIT!!!
That was... that was.......
SO FUCKING AWESOME!!! I hope you write another like it! So many people would be staring at me right now if they knew I was writing this.
That was... that was.......
SO FUCKING AWESOME!!! I hope you write another like it! So many people would be staring at me right now if they knew I was writing this.
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ho~ly fuck. I would call this good, except that it's not. It's completely, 100%, totally evil. I enjoyed much of it, and I guess that makes me fucked up as well. hm
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very compelling, very disturbing. Please keep writing.
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT! That was so sad and detailed! Poor fat Sora... needs to diet soon... haha...
Anywho, this is getting good.
LONG LIVE QUICK UPDATES! XD
Anywho, this is getting good.
LONG LIVE QUICK UPDATES! XD
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have a twisted mind. This is still the most disturbing fic I've ever read. More, please. Don't leave us hanging too long.
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O__O Wow...that second chapter...was...sick? shocking? unexpected? Yes, all those and much much more. I actually am beginning to think there is no such thing as a happy ending, for this fanfic anyway. And Holy Fuck, Sora isn't wrong in being more afraid of himself than Axel...what he did was...all of the above I already listed. O_O; What Axel did compared to what Sora did just doesn't even sound half as bad right now. Yet, none the less, I can't wait for another chapter. Hope to be able to read more soon. ^^;
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
......Dark, to say the least... but I enjoyed it.
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-whistles-
Wow... Dude... that... was... so... freakin'.... AWESOME! I loved the way you described it all! I didn't get the chance to read this yesterday, so I was really happy when I got the chance to finally sit down after school and read this! Wow... Please write more! I love it! XD
Wow... Dude... that... was... so... freakin'.... AWESOME! I loved the way you described it all! I didn't get the chance to read this yesterday, so I was really happy when I got the chance to finally sit down after school and read this! Wow... Please write more! I love it! XD
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Twice now, this fic has made me feel rather like I want to throw up. I get sick to my stomach every time I read it, and I still want more. Your Axel is everything that IS Axel: sick, cruel, terrifying, and yet utterly, utterly compelling. He makes me feel dirty.