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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty well written but the only thing that bugs me is...What the hell happened to Zeig? oo It wouldn't be such a bad thing if not for the fact that Rose shows such love for Zeig. THerefor Rose seemed very out of character.
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^ ^ Never thought i'd see a re-worked version of this on this site. Is this going to be just a one shot or will there be more chapters? If there's going to be more, maybe you could throw in a love triangle with Wink, Lloyd and Rose ending with RXL ofcourse. And more descriptive love scences? ^ _ <