rate_review Reviews

Guilty fapping :3

Wooh! Deranged Sora, now that was a good twist! Love it!~

Disturbing is the word for it alright... Gurl!
I started to read this fic with a slight fuzzy feeling in my stomach, you know Sora lusting after Riku, fantasizing and stuff...
But when it became clear that he would force himself upon Riku, I think my stomach twisted... My finger that had been pressing down the 'page down'- button left it's spot and I just continued to read with an open mouth, as in shock.
I found the scene disturbing, yet I can't deny that I liked it, a lot.
Your writing style, grammar and spelling are excellent, the way you portray Sora's inner emotions is just unbelievable, I really wish I could write like you!
Even the sanest of persons can become mad, and that's exactly what you've shown here, I'm impressed. It's not quite often that you get a fic written this good or with the same quality... Really, I am impressed.

I'll stop babbling now, hehehe...

-BDP

that was t3h s3x!
wonderful!
nice job!
~ja ne!

MAN THAT WAS SOOO COOL! I LOVED IT!!!!!

Meep. Talk about a totally OOC Sora! I don't like non-con stuff, but you're an excellent writer! ^^