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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
In my view, you were good, if not better than the average around here.Incest isnt really a hot topic for many people, including me, but the way you described it was very interesting.The only pointer i would have is to lengthen your chapters a little.
And BTW, i loved the ending.
It was funny and gave way for a Sequal.*hint,hint*
And BTW, i loved the ending.
It was funny and gave way for a Sequal.*hint,hint*
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Incest is normally not my thing, but I bought it.
Very good for being your first lemon! It was short and concise,
but it didn't need to be longer. Now, how about a sequel with Lilly? ;)
Hope to see more.
Very good for being your first lemon! It was short and concise,
but it didn't need to be longer. Now, how about a sequel with Lilly? ;)
Hope to see more.