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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, 'tis a very emo Riku. o.o But sometimes it didn't rhyme and sometimes it did, that would be the only problem I have with it. The flow is very smooth, 'cept for maybe the first verse... but it's not a biggie. Keep it up. ^^
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg that was such a prett y poem..I really like the way you caught Riku's other personality....He's soo hott..OO *DROOLS*