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Please update very soon I'm begging you. This story is liek awesome

I reeeeally hate kairi. And now I hate her even more. You rawks, you know that?

update. FAST!

OMG! Words cannot describe how much I hate Kairi. If there was one person in this whole world that I could kill, it would be her. No you must understand that I am a person that is against viloence and believe in working things out. However, not matter how I try to like her, it back fires. I hope selphie beats her ass and then Riku and then Sora. Matter of fact, I hate all the girls in this story except the girl from the flower store and at Taverse Town. I am in suspence so you must update as soon as possible. Thank you very much for the e-mail. It helps me a lot.

go ooon go onnn !!! You left in some great part

*hyperventilating* Why do you always have to stop at the exciting parts? ;_; I'm still sooo happy you updated though.. I checked AdultFF everyday hoping this story was updated... *squealed really loud when she saw the story had been updated* >>; Yes, I have no life. xP I'm glad Riku still likes Sora even though he's a guy.. =D And very glad he ditched Kairi to go find Sora. Yes. And I should prolly be in bed right now.. >.>; Update soon! Please! >.<

Yay you updated! I really like your story. :D You've got a couple word errors... like you said "suspensions" instead of "suspicions" in uhmm...when Riku turned away from Selphie when he asked her where Kairi was. And there was another thing, but I forgot where it is. So you should check over your story before you post it for errors like that ^^
NEVERTHELESS, it's awesome! I can't wait for the next one~

ohhhh please continue writing, pritty please? i just lov u'r story it's one of the best riku/sora stories ive read. ^.^

Woah that was great!
Please update soon!
I want to know what happens next!

Update please? >< I wanna know what happens to poor Sora!!