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Well I feel more sorry for Sora ( I know look at the name off chorse I would say that) But thats not the reason I mean I sure would want to get hit with a rock over some guy you don't really know/like that much. I mean if she hits the face I am scared for life because now some things wrong with it.
-see ya

o.o now bleeding and possible deaths. I love it, I hope I can see the next part soon

DIE KAIRI U FUCKIN BITCH!!!!!!!!!! @X@

What the hell do you mean, last update for a while? *glare* There'd better be updates soon, or else I'll rally... little... ninja aliens...! Yeah! They'll come for you if you don't update soon. And I really hopes things are straightened out later. I hate it when people hate other people because of misunderstandings. And omg Kairi smacked Sora with a rock... in da head. *kills her* And if I had to place my pity with anyone, it would have to be Sora. HE ONLY WANTS HIS LOVE BACK!

Just one question about chapter 20: Did Wakka get hit by Kuja (FF9)?

And to answer the 'who do you feel sorry for' question: Riku. Why? Simple, he calls that bitch of a kairi a best friend. She's nothing more then a friggin selfish succubus. Can't you create a scene where Riku finds out what Kairi did to Sora? And perhaps kill Kairi later in a carcrash or sumsing... pretty please? :3
But beside that all... This is one heck of a good story. I don't know when I started reading this, but I'm enjoying it so far... A few typo's here and there, but nothing much to worry about.
I wish I could give better feedback, but I'm to lazy right now... gomen ne. But please, continue this... Cloud is adorable btw. :P

OMG! I thought I couldn't hate kairi anymore but the last chapter proved me wrong. I completly LOATH that BITCH! Her audacity is astounding. God I hope Riku kicks her ass and sends her to hell in a fruit basket.

Some of my favorite lines between the two chapters where as follows:

(1) -He trudged up the stairs to his room, and completely forgot there was a predator in the house.-

(2) -Riku took his pillow out from under his head, covered his face and screamed. (I can so picture him doing that lol )

(3) -“How do you confuse a man with a woman!” Kairi laughed. - ( obviously you, you stupid crack whore )

(4) -Throughout the neighbor hood, Cloud was heard screaming about his babies ( I almost wet my pants with that one.)

(5) -Cloud opened his eyes wide at her and tried to telepathically tell her to shut up. ( I did that to my older sister once. She just couldn't take a hint)

I LOVE this story and hope to see more soon. I know it is not easy but I have faith is you young jeti master. Thank you very much for telling me updated! YOU ROCK!

pls pls PLS maek it RikuxSora!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

awwwwwwww poor Sora's all confuzzed! yay Riku FINALLY kissed him properly! wooooooooooo!

I really enjoyed the part with Sora and Riku. It was really cute. I can't wait to read more. This fic rocks!!
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