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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is...very original, for the kokiri names, the shooting seeds in front of the chickens and all that. I hope to see more of your work.
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I will honestly say that I didn't read the story, and that I have no intention to do so. I just had to pay my respects to what must be the most brilliant title ever ^_^V gogo!
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fix your grammar, improve your writing in general, and slow the sex down. Otherwise, while it doesn't have much of a plot, it does have promise.
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You must have beaten the game to know every area and name, I like that in a gamer. I also I like the part when Link hit the owl, all I was thinking was 10 for 10. I would like to see Ganan (or Ganandorf depending on the game) to rape Zelda.
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so far, good, BJ's could use a little more discription though. aside from that, don't stop, please!!
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good storie would really like to read more as soon as possible so update soon please.
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
IT STOPPED!!!????? JUST LIKE THAT!??
C`MON!! WHEN COMES THE REST?
I WANT TO READ MOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRREEEEEEEE!!!
OH MY GOD!!! If my mother saw me read this...I don`t wanna think of what she would do to me!
Anyway: THIS FIC WAS S.G.T.I.F.O.M.C.! S.!!!
( So Great That I Fell Of My Chair! Seriously! )
IT STOPPED!!!????? JUST LIKE THAT!??
C`MON!! WHEN COMES THE REST?
I WANT TO READ MOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRREEEEEEEE!!!
OH MY GOD!!! If my mother saw me read this...I don`t wanna think of what she would do to me!
Anyway: THIS FIC WAS S.G.T.I.F.O.M.C.! S.!!!
( So Great That I Fell Of My Chair! Seriously! )
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool but wierd
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well good story except......LONGGER SEX SCENES PLEASE!
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. Update soon.