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for Hard Place

by Jemisard

person Sofie
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm....

Nothing brightens my day more than one of your fics filled to the brim and overflowing with hot, sweaty smut (read: MAN SEX!). ;D

I love Dax's desperation, I love Jak's almost-silence throughout the fic, I adore the last exchange of words at the end, where Jak shushes Dax.

Very hot, very emotive, very sweet. :D Did I mention hot? Like a jar of capsicum peppers? :DD

~huggles~ I wish your muses would come back to you, Jemi... You make the fanfic world a better place. ^___^
person ZombieDuke(not logged in)
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*goofy grin* That was fucking delicious! An alleyway. Jak and Dax. The humping was WONDERFUL! Hehe, poor Dax :)
person Atsim Frotw
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Jak/Daxter smut! -blush- That was -blushes so much she catches on fire- Ne? AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH! PUT IT OUT, PUT IT OUT!! Wait. I'm a pyro. -growls- Touch the fire and die! -gigles insanley as she watches her hair burn away- Oh -finaly notices author- Sorry about that -_-;. Good story! Like how you write. Hey, that rhymed! Keep up the good stuff, or else I'll hunt ya down! -loads bazooka- Just kidding! -smiles but keeps loading bazooka and several automatics-.

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