rate_review Reviews

That was made of serious win.

Well, umm... This is my first review here at adultfanfiction. (Hehe! It feels naughty! ^_^)

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Ahem!

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Mikau's so hawt! ^_^ This was exciting to read... and very, very awkward.

Good job! ^_^

pdg for a 16 yr old, but isn't that about the time when such things happen. You're just articulate about it. quite a randy tale. I wish all 16 yr olds could be as eloquent

Nyah! I like me some non-human copulation. ^^; We need more Zora sex up in hurr...

And what is so humiliating about that? lol are you like 75

ok that wasn't even funny, jokes aside, that was a nice fic. Oh to be in "the thores of sexual pleasure!" to be young! Some good description here

strange idea you had there with the peeking, a funny one too

You have good language and its very flowing, im 16 and i cant write shit like that (not that your fic was shit)

dunno if I like Zora sex yet, ill have to try some more!

re: saxboy

Thanks! :)

The zora thing is understandable. Not everybody gets into my weird fetishes, sometimes even I am confused by them. Why, at age 14 I wanted to fuck the creature from Alien! ... ;_;

PS: Hahaha XD. For the record I just turned 21. Booze up and riot!