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by Tsuke

person dark_shinobi420
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm this is an okay fic. And also, man, Cortana is EVIL in this . . . :0
person CKNoling
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty good being your first fic though. Keep it up.
person CKNoling
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's interesting, in a funny kind of way, and no...I'm not saying that to be mean. I'm not being mean in the first place. Spotted a few errors, but I have a few errors in my fic as well. No ones perfect. Anyway, good job. Made me laugh.
person Tsuke
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, thanks everyone.

I know there are probably a number of errors, but hey, i think i did good for this to be my very first fic ever....you'd think id start writting sooner...
^_^ anyways, thanks for the reviews everyone!
Remember, in a fanfic, anything is possible....so i think by now you can all foreshadow whats gonna happen next..


person Some_guy
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I like where this is headed. Hope you keep going...
person Alpha
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is nice, plesae continue are you ging to try and get John and Cortana together somehow?
person Tsuke
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Way ahead of you..well...almost..

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