rate_review Reviews

OMG I almost cried!! Great job!

awesome work here - although there were minor probs: like the love scene came up too abruptly... could you perhaps consider transitional scenes that could lead up to it? and it kinda felt that torn was asking a bit too many questions... Nevertheless, this is still great work!! Emotional, intense, gratifying, sensual, bittersweet ~

sooo damn sweet.... you killed Jak though.... oh well... ;_; got me crying