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June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lose the 31337 5p34k, and you have a great lemon.
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February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, Luigi rocks, and I love Princess Toadstool ;), Fuck Mario :P
Thus it's a very good sexy cool story! :-)
Thus it's a very good sexy cool story! :-)
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol this is lol1111
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is terribly written. The script format ruins the pacing and the description is just uncreative. Feeble effort.
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Anon has a few good points, but i did enjoy reading this!
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh I guess you umm didnt use the spell checker or even try to sort the sentencing out! Very um different, ever so plotless and you could of killed Mario off in a better way you know. It has a lot of potential please try and sort it out and post again, because it is a good idea well im sorry but i have to be honest. 1/5