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for Appearences Can Be Deceiving

by LordNC

person RAW19
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*justin timberlake starts singing* 'cum me a river! cum me a river, oh!'

i'm sorry, i had to say that! this story is excellent though! i hope you update soon!
person Some Girl
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... wow! Interesting... and what's your user name? Cause I'll come and read them! Please update this! NOW!!
person Colfon
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, when will there be another chapter?
person ...
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WTF
person Some Girl
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You... are... my... HERO!! I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR A STORY LIKE THIS ON HERE!! Oops... sorry I was yelling, but I'm just sooooo excited! I love a FemaleTails?Sonic fic! Update ASAP!! PLEEEEEEEEASE!!
person ???
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was pretty good keep it up. Oh and its perfection( not prefection) thats kind of ironic. Would you be willing to try tailss changing back to male for a sex scene and having his male parts as big as his female.(if ya know what I mean....or bigger...)
person Ace
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That started off good. so many possibilitys but unfortunatly the end wasnt very good. You rush too much, SLOW DOWN. Build up some passion to it and re-do the ending. I doubt sonic would just fuck her and then leave. Ending with the two falling asleep or even an "i love you" gives the story a good end.

Hope these comments are helpfull. Lookin forward to the next one
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THAT DOUJIN! BWAHAHAH! Hot.

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