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That was so unbelievably hot. I pray you have a follow-up or sequal to this. You have now made Sagat/Vega my new favorite Street Fighter couple

...dude. That was amazingly fucking deliciously hot. The detail, eee. om nom nom.

the end slap on the ass... priceless. I loved it. XD

wow...didn't expect to think of sagat that way...but that was not too bad...no, that was really good...

Well done! You should be really prowd of this story. It was well written, I could read it and understand the majority of what you were saying, and the sex scene was almost getting me going.
The one thing I would have to say against you (and it has nothing to do with the story) is that you need to proof read your work. Nothing dramatic, just a few things missing here or there. So if u do a little tidying, I will definately say that it is one of the better stories I have seen here.
By request, I'd like to advertise you and your work on my journal, so people can read your work. It isn't selling your stories, it is selling u as an author. Email me and tell me what you think. All the best,
shikiblade

I agree, Vega was too easy. But still, HOTT!! X9

I think this is a really good first attempt. My only nitpick is that Vega would have put up much more of a fight before letting a man like Sagat touch him. Other than that it was very well-written and smutty. Keep up the good work!

That was awesome! I have one tiny gripe, Vega definately would've made snotty remarks as to Sagat's looks. I think he's hot but Vega probably would never lay a hand on him, unless he found a perverse nature in messing with Sagat; which is what I was thinking throughout the sex scene. Sagat was hot as hell in this fic, Great story!!

*****